From 497894e756815565820190c536e1dd5713d75c53 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dante Dam <37320033+laggycomputer@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Fri, 12 Apr 2019 16:38:24 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Improvements to intro docs. --- docs/intro.rst | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/intro.rst b/docs/intro.rst index 1e163c8a5..be8bea0c7 100644 --- a/docs/intro.rst +++ b/docs/intro.rst @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ On Linux environments, installing voice requires getting the following dependenc - libnacl - python3-dev -For a debian-based system, the following command will help get those dependencies: +For a Debian-based system, the following command will get these dependencies: .. code-block:: shell @@ -51,10 +51,10 @@ Remember to check your permissions! Virtual Environments ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ -Sometimes we don't want to pollute our system installs with a library or we want to maintain -different versions of a library than the currently system installed one. Or we don't have permissions to -install a library along side with the system installed ones. For this purpose, the standard library as -of 3.3 comes with a concept called "Virtual Environment" to help maintain these separate versions. +Sometimes you want to keep libraries from polluting system installs or use a different version of +libraries than the ones installed on the system. You might also not have permissions to install libaries system-wide. +For this purpose, the standard library as of Python 3.3 comes with a concept called "Virtual Environment"s to +help maintain these separate versions. A more in-depth tutorial is found on `the official documentation. `_ @@ -85,14 +85,14 @@ However, for the quick and dirty: $ pip install -U discord.py -Congratulations. You now have a virtual environment all set up without messing with your system installation. +Congratulations. You now have a virtual environment all set up. Basic Concepts --------------- discord.py revolves around the concept of :ref:`events `. An event is something you listen to and then respond to. For example, when a message -happens, you will receive an event about it and you can then respond to it. +happens, you will receive an event about it that you can respond to. A quick example to showcase how events work: